Slowly it crept.
Like a sea of silence.
Like a blanket of deadly calm.
Like an ether full of unsaid words.
Complicated, convoluted.
Corrupting all innocence.
Polluting all gestures.
Numbing gradually.
Turning all warmth to ice.
And softness to frigidity.
Took me a while to realize.
The signs were everywhere.
But I had misread them in my rosy stupor.
All this while I thought a new dawn was near,
When creeping unaware around me was the sense of an ending.
(Inspired by Julian Barnes's ultimate winner-and life)
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13 comments:
Yet again! :) wonderful!!
@anonymous-thx!
can writings get more depressing?
@Neel:setting another low:)
Yeh paadhke mera toh poora pot hi melt ho gaya...i mean padhke
@Kapai:lol, taking it as a compliment:)
Please add kriti in it. her ID kritinarain@yahoo.com
and...you write wonderfully, post on them on fB notes as well
@Madhu:Sure, and thankyou dear:)
Though u talk about complications here.. yet its simple.. beautiful...
Also rite said Neel... next one shud be a happy one ...
@Romi:thx!sure-will try!
oooh this one feels like bitterness creeping in. Brilliant.
@Mo:thx!looks like I have to write a happy one now:)
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