Sunday, May 16, 2010

T.O. T.H.E. H.E.A.V.E.N. I. S.A.W.

I may not come back,
To the gates of heaven.
I may not come back,
And be humbled by your vastness.
I may not come back,
To be drowned in your blues.
I may not come back,
To be dyed in your hues.
I may not come back,
To be snowed upon in your deserts.
But where ever I shall be,
I will remember your towering whites,
I will remember your deep blues,
I will remember how you humbled me silently,
By standing there for ages and asking no dues.
So I may not come back,
To lose myself again.
But whenever I am battling hell,
I will remember how your mountains stood silently,
How your waters flew so gently,
And that's all you had to do to make me sane.

(Inspired by Leh, Pangong, and humility.)


JJ said...

By far one of your best. Echoes my sentiments aptly.:)

Witness said...

Thx JJ:)

Jasneet said...

too good ya.. loved it.

Witness said...

thx Kohli:)u wud love d place too!

Feeling Just Right said...

Awwwwwww! Beautiful. Beautiful writing. I totally applaud you for this!

Ankita said...

:)relived the moments!

Neel said...


Supss said...

bravo girl!

Vivek Agarwal said...

Good one -

Mahuya said...

Beautiful! I will carry your words when I go there ... :)

damini said...

superb :)

Witness said...

@Fjr,Ankita,Neel,Supps,Vivek,Mahuya,Damini:Thx a ton!

McConnell Group said...

Very Eloquent!

Witness said...


D2 said...

Beautifully written.

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Keep writing.

Baunilha said...

loved itt

Witness said...

Thx D2:)

Witness said...

I m glad Baunilha:)

kavita said...

Well said dear.!!!

Witness said...

Thank u jee:)

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Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration and laughter,

Witness said...

@3-G The Poet:Thx!

girlay said...

whoa nice nice...great place at the background..

Witness said...

thx Girlay:)