Saturday, January 9, 2010

G.O.D's O.W.N.


Floating.
Weightless on a sea of dreams.
Stillness.
Holding me in a world of green.
Nirvana.
Pervades me in a land so calm.
Numbness.
Enveloping me like a balm.
Endless.
Blue skies that stretch on and on.
Bliss.
Encountered in moments that linger on.
Smiles.
Shining their torches all around.
Fun.
Unadulterated and without bounds.
Connections.
Some lost, some found.
Peace.
Minus all surround sound.
A land where the sun always shone.
A country akin to an unwind zone.
Now I know why it's God's own.



(Inspired by a sojourn to God's Own Country.)

6 comments:

zubin said...

Awesome. Seems like a really amazing trip. And its written brilliantly. Utterly delightful. Especially love the ending :).

Witness said...

Thx Zubin:)it was:)

Mahuya said...

The ending is amazing. The build up is very general - could be any country, anywhere, any body ... but when you reach the end, suddenly every thing comes together. And thats what makes it so beautiful :)

P.S.: "A land where the sun always shone" . Really?? Because you visited Kerala when it was NOT monsoon?? :P

Witness said...

Thx Mahuya:)well actually most of the times:)it guess it was more of the sunny spirit that rubbed off on me:)

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Mile said...

This is absolutely amazing! It brought a smile to my heart.